Week 8a

Today in class I decided to finalize my first three images. I took away the vingetting in the first panel and drew the mother's legs to suggest she was holding the baby in her lap. In the next frame, I darkened up the silhouette of the kids on the swings and evened up the shrubbery in the background. Finally, I completed the third image and gave it a subtle background. For all three images, I moved a lot of the imagery down to make room for the word boxes I will be using. Overall, I think making these changes made the images stronger as a whole and I feel better about moving on. Here they are:

Additionally, I began another panel on Tuesday. I will continue to work on it, and more, in Wednesday's class. Here is what that panel looks like so far: