Pros:
- Story is consecutive and flows well
- Grayscale works well for the horror aspect of comic
- Good sense of depth in panels
- Well illustrated backgrounds
- Good character consistency
- Good stopping point, creates tension
Cons:
- There are lots of head on camera angles (maybe play with some more)
- Pink color stands out amongst gray, maybe use throughout the background more
- Use glyphs more across comic
- Jagged edges should go around the whole edge of the speech bubble
- Some characters look too flat
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