Week 4a

Today in class we had a critique on our final comics. My comic went over relatively well, however here are some of the criticisms I received:

• good line weight on the border
• the colors of the silhouette varies from that of the border, make sure they are the same
• the spikes on the speech bubble which denotes music are too extreme, maybe add more spikes around the whole bubble, or deemphasize them a little
• try to make it more obvious that it is music as opposed to speech, maybe by adding 
• in the first panel, consider zooming out to show more of the class
• the title isn't the best choice, a better one might be "The Hypocritical Professor"
• maybe add another student and have them reacting to the professor
• maybe add another panel where the professor is fumbling with his phone
• good technique with shading and hatching